tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3570418979909525883.post6862526213891468474..comments2023-10-30T02:02:25.369-07:00Comments on Thomas Broening: Good Art Direction/Bad DesignThomasBroeninghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06061929723648424270noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3570418979909525883.post-2071200674546380072007-11-01T11:37:00.000-07:002007-11-01T11:37:00.000-07:00I have a feeling that I am one of the people this ...I have a feeling that I am one of the people this ad is trying to target. Here are my qualifications:<BR/>I'm in my late twenties.<BR/>I own little black dresses.<BR/>I like being barefoot, especially outdoors.<BR/>I appreciate modern furniture design (and balconies).<BR/>I adore the city.<BR/>I'm a night owl.<BR/>I love chocolate.<BR/>I like to keep up with current affairs (an occasional TIME reader).<BR/><BR/>That said, I also happen to be a graphic designer who appreciates good photography. {Thus, the reading of your blog.} It is my personal/professional opinion that this ad downright sucks. In addition to the lack of believability, the copy is awful. Then there are the floating candy bars that glow like a swarm of radioactive fireflies. Sad. I'm sorry you didn't have a better designer downstream.sivadrehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10315103548703288652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3570418979909525883.post-87185297783253843092007-10-17T13:15:00.000-07:002007-10-17T13:15:00.000-07:00I agree. It doesn't look right. Can't imagine th...I agree. It doesn't look right. Can't imagine this woman about to go out or coming home wearing a slinky black dress, looking lovely and chomping away at a huge candy bar. <BR/>Is the candy bar in her hands really necessary to get the point across?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com